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PostSubject: [DONE] Dev diary #1 - Deforges   Sun Jan 27, 2013 4:12 pm

We reached 100 twitter followers so I wrote up my diary real quick.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/cbkfs12vlekwj42/Battlecry%20Dev%20diary%20-%20deforges.pdf
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Dev diary #1 - Deforges   Sun Jan 27, 2013 9:45 pm

Good detail Deforges. I noticed a few sentences where the grammar wasn't perfect:

"The A280, for example,
looks different across the many films, games, and comics it was depicted."

Should it not say and comics it was depicted in?

"We will coming out with our first alpha
later this year which will be open to everyone."

Should be something like we will hopefully release our first alpha later this year.

"After creating each part the makes up the model, I save another
copy for what will be the low poly model."

Should be after creating each part that makes up the model.


Also, could you make the a280 reference images a bit bigger too? I think it could do with our logo somewhere and perhaps a nice border?
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Dev diary #1 - Deforges   Sun Jan 27, 2013 10:34 pm

I like!
And OMG OMG first ingame(/editor) screenshot since the early Hoth terrain!

And I agree with cameron on a Logo and if possible larger images.
If we just post the diary, not the .pdf that logo isn't necessary tho.
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Dev diary #1 - Deforges   Sun Jan 27, 2013 10:37 pm

Great work!!

I can suggest maybe putting some desktop pictures to show your "workstation" ;d
Maybe also some wireframes of some models ( high and low poly put together for example).

The other is perfect.
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Dev diary #1 - Deforges   Mon Jan 28, 2013 3:49 am

rocknroll237 wrote:
Good detail Deforges. I noticed a few sentences where the grammar wasn't perfect:

"The A280, for example,
looks different across the many films, games, and comics it was depicted."

Should it not say and comics it was depicted in?


You never end a senetence with a preposition!

Quote :

"We will coming out with our first alpha
later this year which will be open to everyone."

Should be something like we will hopefully release our first alpha later this year.

sure thing. I don't think we'll have any trouble reaching that deadline though for what it's worth.


Quote :
"After creating each part the makes up the model, I save another
copy for what will be the low poly model."

Should be after creating each part that makes up the model.


of course

rocknroll237 wrote:

Also, could you make the a280 reference images a bit bigger too? I think it could do with our logo somewhere and perhaps a nice border?

sure! I think everything is editable on the dropbox. so you can also edit anything closer if you catch anything else.
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PostSubject: Re: [DONE] Dev diary #1 - Deforges   Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:49 am

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